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Hit me
Hate me
Kick me
Bruise me
Love me
Betray me
Curse me
Disrespect me
Abuse me
Beat me
Hurt me
        But
            you'll
                   never
                         break
                               me.
To: the world and the various bullies it contains: do your worst, but you'll never win. I'll come back stronger than before, rising from the ashes like a phoenix. Your worst isn't enough to break me. I am strong!
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TheBTSliverWolf Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013   General Artist
Hell. Yes. I live my life on similar lines as this poem. No one can break me. I have been broken once due to the death of my parents. But, I put myself back together again. And now I know, what can break me if I let it. But I will not let anything break me again. I will be strong. I am strong.

Thank you. This poem was beautiful.
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Deepizzaguy Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Student Writer
Sounds like the motto of the Invincible Iron Man of Marvel comics book fame.
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DeviantJewGirl96 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol, it does kind of sound like that, doesn't it? :)
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lateroseredwall Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
Wow! After I read this it gave me goosebumps! This is so true! :D
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grimm-reaper666 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student Artist
so true i love it i think it is amazing
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TerriblySorryMiss Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
It's nice to believe, but then we get hit by a bus.

No matter how unbroken your spirit might remain, your body and brain are not as safe.
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DeviantJewGirl96 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, until invulnerability becomes a reality, I'll settle for an unbroken spirit.
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TerriblySorryMiss Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
Until you get brain damage or something.

But that's highly unlikely, so clinging to an illusion of mental stability is still a pretty safe bet.
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CupcakeArt98 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That is deep.
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PPGDBlossom Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
AMEN SISTER.
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minecraftbob Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
my brain frequently quotes this. stay strong.
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HideTheDecay Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
...? Why is love in there?
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DeviantJewGirl96 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Because love can hurt more than anything else out there.
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HideTheDecay Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't think anyone has ever tried to break anyone with genuine love though.
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DeviantJewGirl96 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
True, but some have come close, albeit inadvertently.
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PandorasMusicalBox Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I think it could be like how some bullies start out as your friends but then they betray you. Idk, just my 2 cent thoughts :shrug:
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hoplessromantic18 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this is encouraging :)
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KavotofFire Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
like your writing and poem
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gost4ever Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
:) dude ur awesome
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DeviantJewGirl96 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol, thank you. :D
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ChubbieBunnie Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student General Artist
Mh.... I wish I was this strong...
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naarii0015 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Professional General Artist
:iconclapplz: Well said dear. ^-^
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shiningblackwolf Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very well said and absolutely true.
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mabelpinesrules1 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student General Artist
well said
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BunnyGirl4ever Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah! ^w^ True,true,true. XD
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